Transition signals are words and phrases that link one
sentence with another sentence, usually the one immediately before it. They can
also be used in a compound sentence to connect the second independent clause
with the first one. These words and phrases function as adverbs that modify
entire sentences; hence, they are called sentence adverbs.
The first set of signals explained here belong to the
language of argument (demonstration or proof). These signals relate
statements (propositions consisting of a subject and a predicate) in a sequence
of statements that moves by logical steps towards a conclusion. The second set
of signals belongs to compare and contrast essays.
Signals for Argumentative Essays
1. Signals of an apparent contradiction
2. Related words (connect clauses)
3. Signals of concession
4. Signals of parallel support
5. Adjectives that indicate parallel support
6. Signals of sequence (also parallel)
1. Signals of an apparent contradiction
2. Related words (connect clauses)
3. Signals of concession
4. Signals of parallel support
5. Adjectives that indicate parallel support
6. Signals of sequence (also parallel)
Signals for Compare Contrast
Essays
7. Signals of likeness
8. Signals of difference
9. Related words
10. Signals of logical consequence
11. Signals of illustration
12. Signals of restatement
13. Other Signals of Continuity:
Pronouns,
Demonstrative adjectives
Repeated words and phrases
7. Signals of likeness
8. Signals of difference
9. Related words
10. Signals of logical consequence
11. Signals of illustration
12. Signals of restatement
13. Other Signals of Continuity:
Pronouns,
Demonstrative adjectives
Repeated words and phrases
1. Signals of an apparent contradiction for
argumentative essays
These signals introduce statements that appear to
contradict the previous point.
however,
Nevertheless,
Nonetheless,
And yet,
Nevertheless,
Nonetheless,
And yet,
Success is impossible without confidence; however,
overconfidence leads to failure.
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The Greek gods are more powerful than mortals; nevertheless,
they must bow to the higher power of fate.
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although , but
Although the weather cleared up, the
flooding only got worse.
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The queen initially acts as a devoted leader, but
later she abandons her duty for love.
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Discussion: Signals of difference and signals of apparent
contradiction are easy to confuse. The former typically involve a contrast
between two individuals, two groups, or two events. The latter involve very
often a contrast between a fact about a group and a fact about an individual
member of the group or between a general rule and a specific case (an
exception). Apparent contradiction occurs when two points suggest opposite
conclusions even though they are not strictly incompatible themselves. Consider
the following examples which illustrate the difference between signals of
apparent contradiction and signals of difference:
I like sports; however, I don't like hockey.
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I like sports. My brother, on the other hand,
despises them.
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These words introduce points that contradict your main
point, which you are conceding without giving up your claim that your main
point is true.
Of course,
To be sure,
Granted,
Naturally,
It is true that
Admittedly,
To be sure,
Granted,
Naturally,
It is true that
Admittedly,
In the Aeneid Aeneas illustrates the idea of
pietas, the Roman ideal of duty to family, state, and gods. Of course,
when we first encounter him in the poem, he has forgotten his obligation to
his people and succumbed to self-pity. As the poem proceeds, however,
he overcomes his weakness and makes the personal sacrifices that pietas
demands.
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Discussion: Signals of concession are used in
situations where you want to introduce an opposing point, but you don't want to
stress it because it contradicts your main idea. Signals of apparent
contradiction always stress the point they introduce. Notice that a concession
must be followed by a point in support of your main idea and that the
transition from concession to support requires a signal of apparent
contradiction.
These signals indicate that the point introduced by
the signal is separate from the previous point, but equal to it in effect or
consequence (in other words, it supports for the same general idea).
also (Use this signal only once in a
paragraph.)
In addition,
Moreover, (This signal emphasizes the point introduced.)
Furthermore, (This signal emphasizes the point introduced.)
In addition,
Moreover, (This signal emphasizes the point introduced.)
Furthermore, (This signal emphasizes the point introduced.)
Athena in the Odyssey represents the idea of
intelligence, especially as it appears in clever schemes and contrivances.
Thus, she is associated with strategy in war; it was she who inspired
Odysseus to build the Trojan horse. She also is the goddess of
handicraft, especially weaving; it is she who inspires women to weave
intricate designs upon the loom.
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Beware of using "also" or any of the other
signals of parallel support to join ideas which are not parallel. For example,
in the following passage the point which "also" introduces is a
consequence of the previous point.
Athena in the Odyssey represents the idea of
intelligence, especially as it appears in clever schemes and contrivances. Also,
she is associated with strategy in war; it was she who inspired Odysseus to
build the Trojan horse.
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another,
additional,
further
additional,
further
Ares is the god of war. Another deity found
on the battlefield is Athena, who is associated with military strategy; it
was she who inspired Odysseus to build the Trojan horse.
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First,
Second,
Third,
Fourth, etc.
Finally,
Second,
Third,
Fourth, etc.
Finally,
The first four of these signals can be used either as
adverbs or as adjectives. Note the following example:
A second lesson of the recent French election
is less obvious and yet more important.... A third lesson to the vote is
that the French are ambivalent about modernization in general.
Essays of comparison and contrast require signals of likeness and difference. These signals establish relationships between persons, places, things, structures, or events.
These signals indicate that two things or persons
share a common property or that two events follow a common pattern.
Likewise,
In the same way,
Similarly,
In the same way,
Similarly,
In their epic poetry the Greeks looked back to a
heroic age which they contrasted with their own more crassly materialistic
age. Likewise, among the Germans bards sang of long-dead heroes who
were stronger and more courageous than those who listened to them in the meed
hall.
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These signals indicate that one of two things,
persons, or events, though in some respects similar to the other, lacks a
specific property which the other possesses.
on the other hand,
in contrast,
in contrast,
In the forest reside the fairies, spirits free from
the limitations of physical reality. Lacking the encumbrance of the body,
they enjoy a magical freedom of movement. In contrast, the residents
of Athens are human beings, who possess physical bodies that subject them to
the laws of nature. They cannot pass through even a forest, much less
"flood or fire," with the ease or speed of thought.
In the temple of Juno Aeneas succumbs to the
temptation of pity. In the temple of Apollo, on the other hand, he
does not let such feelings hold him back.
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Whereas,
Unlike
Unlike
Middle school teachers watch over students like
parents, whereas upper school teachers treat them more like
responsible adults.
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Unlike the Fairies, who are free to
pursue their own desires, the mortals are constrained by the laws of nature
and society.
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These signals indicate that the point being introduced
is a logical or necessary result of the point or points preceding it.
Therefore,
Thus,
Consequently,
Hence,
Thus,
Consequently,
Hence,
All men are mortal. Socrates is a man. Therefore,
Socrates is mortal.
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In the Iliad the warriors fight with weapons
made of bronze, never of iron, although when the Greeks learned to work with
iron it quickly displaced the other metal because of its superior strength
and availability. Nonetheless, in Homer's epic similes we find
references to iron implements. We may therefore conclude that Homer
sings of events set in the bronze age but he himself lives in the iron age.
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These signals introduce examples which illustrate a
general point that has just been made.
For example,
For instance,
For instance,
In Don Quixote Cervantes establishes a
pattern which later novelists very often follow. The main character becomes
so enchanted by the romantic tales told in books (or projected on the screens
of cinemas) that he or she loses touch with reality, or rather devotes all of
his or her time to making reality conform to the world of romance and
adventure. For example, in Flaubert's Madame Bovary Emma
embarks on a series of adulterous affairs in a vain attempt to realize in her
own life the stories she read as a girl.
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Use "for example" to introduce an event or
occurrence--one among many--which illustrates a general point. Do not use
"for example" to introduce other kinds of evidence, such as someone's
opinion that something is true. Study the following three passages. Can you see
why "for example" is inappropriate in the first one?
In the Odyssey the gods watch out for
beggars. For example, Eumaeus says, "Every stranger and beggar
comes from Zeus" (14.66).
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Can you see how the next two passages avoid the error?
In the Odyssey the gods watch out for beggars
just as Eumaeus says: "Every stranger and beggar comes from Zeus"
(14.66).
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In the Odyssey social class is no index of
moral character. For example, the swineherd Eumaeus displays the noble
traits of generosity and modesty when he welcomes Odysseus to his hut.
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These signals introduce clarifications.
that is,
in other words,
in simpler terms,
to put it differently,
in other words,
in simpler terms,
to put it differently,
Hermes is not only the messenger of Zeus, but the
patron of thieves. In other words, he is the god of authorized and
unauthorized transfers.
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These signals do not specify what kind of relation one
sentence has to its predecessors, but simply indicate that the same topic is
still under discussion.
Pronouns
In the Odyss
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